As usual, I am cracking my head to organise a wonderful birthday party for them.
This year is "PIRATE THEME"
I had ordered a pirate island cake, pirates cupcakes and planning anything related to it. I also plan some treasure hunt.
Wonder if the boys will like it?
Its really tough to handle a group of energetic boys. Hope I wont faint on 13th April 2008!
2008年4月5日星期六
THE 2ND TWIN
DARREN ANG
This boy is always up to mischief. He did something n make his grandma v upset last week. Well, at least he apologise.
Nevertheless, he also writes a good compo and was so proud that his teacher asked him to type it n paste on the notice board for everyone to read. He scored a 15/20. Keep it up!
THE LITTLE PUPPY
It was a beautiful day. I was strolling in the park when I heard some sound behind me. I turned around curiously. I was surprised to see a little puppy hiding behind a bin. It was looking at me with its big pleading eyes. I held the puppy in my arms and patted its head.
The puppy was thin and injured. It had some burnt patched on its body. I brought him to the vet quickly. The vet examined the little puppy’s body and treated it. He told me that someone had used a cigarette to hurt the little puppy. I felt angry and pitied the poor little puppy. Luckily, the little puppy was not seriously abused.
I took the little puppy home. My parents were shocked to see the little puppy in the house. “I demand and explanation for this”! My father’s voice boomed with anger. I explained myself and persuaded my my parents to keep it but they refused. I was bitterly disappointed and I cried. My parents took sympathy when they saw me crying my heart out and relented.
We named the puppy “Spot”. We were glad that no one had come to find Spot after a few months. We presumed that Spot previous owner chose to abuse and desert him. My family showered Spot with love and care now.
It was a beautiful day. I was strolling in the park when I heard some sound behind me. I turned around curiously. I was surprised to see a little puppy hiding behind a bin. It was looking at me with its big pleading eyes. I held the puppy in my arms and patted its head.
The puppy was thin and injured. It had some burnt patched on its body. I brought him to the vet quickly. The vet examined the little puppy’s body and treated it. He told me that someone had used a cigarette to hurt the little puppy. I felt angry and pitied the poor little puppy. Luckily, the little puppy was not seriously abused.
I took the little puppy home. My parents were shocked to see the little puppy in the house. “I demand and explanation for this”! My father’s voice boomed with anger. I explained myself and persuaded my my parents to keep it but they refused. I was bitterly disappointed and I cried. My parents took sympathy when they saw me crying my heart out and relented.
We named the puppy “Spot”. We were glad that no one had come to find Spot after a few months. We presumed that Spot previous owner chose to abuse and desert him. My family showered Spot with love and care now.
THE 1ST TWIN
DAMIEN ANG
Damien is always v mature. He looks after his bro well. We call him the nanny at home.
He did a compo on 4th March 2008 and scored a 16/20.
This is what he wrote. I felt it was well written. Well done!
He did a compo on 4th March 2008 and scored a 16/20.
This is what he wrote. I felt it was well written. Well done!
A STRAY DOG
The sun shone brilliantly in the clear blue sky that was dotted with fluffy white clouds. I was going home after school when I heard a sound behind me. I turned around and saw a tiny brown hungry looking puppy following me. It looked at me with its big brown pleading eyes. At that moment, I knew what I had to do.
I slowly picked up the puppy carefully. I noticed that it was injured. A small patch of skin was raw and its leg was bleeding. When I reached home, I asked my mother to bring the puppy to the vet. The vet examined the puppy and bandaged its legs. He also applied medicine on its raw wound. We felt sorry for the puppy as it was in great pain. The vet gave the puppy an injection and said it would recover in a few weeks. The vet told us that the puppy had been abused by someone. I was upset and angry on hearing that.
We returned home and fed the puppy with some milk. I asked my mother if we could keep the puppy. My mother was unwilling to keep it but my father persuaded her. He told her that keeping a dog could keep out burglars. Finally, my mother agreed stating that we would have to return the puppy if someone were to claim it. We were overwhelmed and named the puppy “Browny” because it had brown patches on its body.
Two months later, we presumed that Browny’s previous owner had actually deserted him as there were no notices in search for him. Browny lived happily with us now. I wondered why people had pets when they did not know how to look after them. I promised to love and care for Browny forever.
The sun shone brilliantly in the clear blue sky that was dotted with fluffy white clouds. I was going home after school when I heard a sound behind me. I turned around and saw a tiny brown hungry looking puppy following me. It looked at me with its big brown pleading eyes. At that moment, I knew what I had to do.
I slowly picked up the puppy carefully. I noticed that it was injured. A small patch of skin was raw and its leg was bleeding. When I reached home, I asked my mother to bring the puppy to the vet. The vet examined the puppy and bandaged its legs. He also applied medicine on its raw wound. We felt sorry for the puppy as it was in great pain. The vet gave the puppy an injection and said it would recover in a few weeks. The vet told us that the puppy had been abused by someone. I was upset and angry on hearing that.
We returned home and fed the puppy with some milk. I asked my mother if we could keep the puppy. My mother was unwilling to keep it but my father persuaded her. He told her that keeping a dog could keep out burglars. Finally, my mother agreed stating that we would have to return the puppy if someone were to claim it. We were overwhelmed and named the puppy “Browny” because it had brown patches on its body.
Two months later, we presumed that Browny’s previous owner had actually deserted him as there were no notices in search for him. Browny lived happily with us now. I wondered why people had pets when they did not know how to look after them. I promised to love and care for Browny forever.
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